[EVA] Pre-reader URGENTLY required

[.+*°°*+.rei-chan.+*°°*+.]

Hi folks,
I just received the translation of my new one-shot fiction about Kaworu. It isn't very long...can someone fix it up for me,please?? It has been translated by an italian, so I would like to have it examined by an american before I'll post it. But I'm looking for someone who can do this kind of job as soon as possibile cuz I'm going to stay away from home for some months and then It would be impossible for me to connect on internet.
Many thanks!!
Rei-chan