[EVA] Eva Manga Stage 77 - Part 2

[Sailor Star Dust]

The only thing I can think that's wrong (not even incorrect, necessarily)
about the translation is "Apostles". Yes, that is the direct translation of
"Shito", but Gainax themselves said they wanted it to be rendered in English
as "Angels" instead. (Yay for Pointless Religious Symbolism!)

Other than that, excellent job! ^_^ It's interesting how Shinji isn't
suicidally-depressed this time around, just depressed. And it's equally
interesting how Adam appeared in Gendou's hand still. (Aww, and here I was
hoping Rei would absorb her (Yes, Adam's female, being the Angels "Mother",
as Episode 24(') shows) in a really cool & different way! :( Oh well.)

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