[FIC][EVA] Daughter

Zhou Tai An kain at pacific.net.sg
Wed Sep 23 15:36:32 EDT 1998


>As can be readily seen throughout the fic itself. You kinda picked up at
>an ended thought in some places and continued on... did that make
>sense?... Urk.

Intended. Actually, I was really really bothered about exactly HOW to potray
Ritsuko throughout the story. I finally decided to be purposely ambiguous
(my original intention) and left it at that. I can't say I'm totally
satisfied with the result, but there are fic saturation points...

>Very obscure. Enjoyably so, though. It makes you think, which is one of
>the wonderful things about your fiction. Simply marvelous.

Thanks again. ^_^

>Terribly sorry I wasn't able to offer C&C whence you sent this to the

Naaah. S'okay. As I stated in the introductory mail, C&C is appreciated but
by no means compulsory.

>prereader list. I've been swamped with things to do since school started
>again, and I'm just now starting to get caught up with the FFML and
>EVAML, not to mention my own projects. And on the day "off" I have, when

Sou ka. I getcha.

>I spend half the time praying to the porcelain buddha. Man I hate the
>flu. Anyhow, nice work.

I don't believe I've heard that particular turn of phrase anywhere...
Zhou Tai An (kain at pacific.net.sg) 

"There is no one simple truth." - Rune Walsh





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