fire_drake at rocketmail.com
Wed Sep 30 13:31:37 EDT 1998
> Well, first off, I have to say what I said to Daniel when he raised
> - rape has no meaning for Rei. She'd count it as simply as if it was
> form of direct physical assault.
That depends... on if you believe Rei was always like she is, or if
you believe she came to be that way. Whether you believe she lacks
emotions, or represses them. The POINT of the fic is the idea that
she could merely be repressing them...
> 1. Better prose and whatnot this time around. A bit too poetic for
> nicely done.
Thanks. It actually got bulked out after I watched a few episodes of
"Key the Metal Idol"... and I thought Eva was trippy... whew.
> 2. Strange title. I would personally have picked "Blood."
It started out as "A Time To..."
I trimmed it back to Time, then slapped the (A time to...) on to
reiderate the point of the title. Blood is to obvious, and jumps to
the end. "Salene" might have worked too...
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