[EVA] Proof readers... please

[EDSPORT83 at aol.com]

Hello all! well i now leave from the shadows of the world of a lurker and 
final thrust myself into the world of participant. as you can tell by the 
subject line i am looking for a  pre proof) reader for a fan fic or so that 
i'm kinda writing right now. thanks to me having an insanely boring 
macroeconomics class (not to mention my teacher is from India and i can only 
understand ever second word he says) i have some extra time to write. now i 
don't even know if what i'm doing is allowed under the by-laws of the ML, but 
its worth a shot. back to the point if you are willing to help out someone 
who needs all the help he can get please respond to this somehow. and i'm 
looking for a reader who will tell me if the story is so bad that you 
wouldn't line the bottom of your bird cage with it. thanks in advance.