[META] RE: [EVA] [fan-fiction] My first one, be nice!

[Novel Idea]

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I presume the previous poster was just suggesting
another forum where you may wish to post your fan fic
:)
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Well then, I'll keep writing! ^_^
I was looking at my first fan-fiction (the second one is being written, but
I'm also correcting the errors on the first).  Something was missing; so
there were grammatical errors, misspellings, even a little gender confusion!
=P
Something was still missing.  It hit me... most fan-fictions, at least Eva
related, (those are the only ones I read) and no matter how bad they are,
have an OMAKE!  WEEEEEEEEEEE!
(This is fort he first "chapter".)
OMAKE
"Another just appeared," Miya cried out.
Another Angel appeared, this one right in the headquarters.  Gendo was
perturbed, how could one just appear?  "Fuyutsuki?"
	"Hai," the older man asked warily.
	"Take care of this."
	"Hai," he replied, a bit crisper this time.
	Gendo left the bridge behind him.  Something had to be done until Touji
could suit up and sync with his Eva.  Gendo rushed down the catwalks until
he saw the Angel.  It just burst through the wall into a test chamber; the
same one Unit-00 had gone Berserk in.
	Misato appeared beside him, "Release the Bakelite in Test Room Three," he
told her calmly.
	"Release the Bakelite," she shouted to the bridge, while pointing the whole
in the wall.
	The next gust of wind brought with it the acrid smell of Bakelite and the
hissing sound of it being shot out through the walls.  Gendo took a deep
breath in through his nose.  "I love the smell of Bakelite in the morning,"
he told the Major, taking another deep whiff "it smells like..." another
sniff, "victory."