[EVA] [fan-fiction] My first one, be nice!
angrydrunkmidget at yahoo.com.au
Fri Mar 15 00:33:08 EST 2002
Gender mix ups o' fun and embarrasment... hmmm... an
idea for a bad fic? ^_^
Ya wrote: (Asuka though... "We need to get into our
suits Dummkopfe!" He was silent until Misato,
reminding him she was still Major, gave him a curt,
"Ahem.")... and... (Touji was holding one arm while
was behind it, her arm around it's [BTW, no ' when
there's no contraction] neck and the hip of her
Unit-00 pressed firmly into it's lower back.)
I just noticed that you wrote "Unit-00", so you
probably meant Rei, not Touji. ^_^
If you need any future pre-reading or editing, just
gimme a holler.
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