[EVA] Is that the real Asuka

[baroncini]

Hi Sebastian !

I think that is not a bad idea to improve other's writings, always with
their aknowledge and agreement I mean.
At the opposit it is a good thing: I my opinion this is the best way to
express Your disappointment with the plot developed by the author.

I didn't write fanfictions at all, but My suggestion is read as much fanfics
as You can and like and, above all, read the critics about them in order to
avoid the same errors (in my job avoiding errors already made by others is
vital!).

What's Your opinion about "End of Eva"? Do You think there will be a sequel?
Personally I hope to see "only one" movie (not new series of episode) to
clarify everything and close definitively the questions raised by EoE.

By

Furio
----- Original Message -----
From: "Sebastian Palm" <winchester at telia.com>
To: <evangelion at eva.onegeek.org>
Sent: Wednesday, May 15, 2002 4:42 PM
Subject: RE: [EVA] Is that the real Asuka


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> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: baroncini [mailto:baroncini at pointest.com]
> > Sent: Wednesday, May 15, 2002 4:17 PM
> > To: evangelion at eva.onegeek.org
> > Subject: Re: [EVA] Is that the real Asuka
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> > Hi and thanks for the answer.
> >
> > Do You mean that the try of Shinji to strangle Asuka is aimed
> > to feel the
> > physiscal contact he always refused with people and her
> > "weak" reaction (the
> > caress) is her first try to open her heart to someone else?
> > You can be right. But how can You explain the theory I read
> > on a fansite (I
> > do not remember which one) who stated that "the Asuka beside
> > Shinji is only
> > a sacrified copy, created to satisfy the disire of Shinji's soul".
> >
> > If it is so, I think that the message left by Anno is too
> > much downbeat and
> > negative.
> >
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> Downbeat and negative is only the half of it. I really don't care what
> people think - I hate all the "canon" endings, although the TV ending is
> a little bit better. Too bad they couldn't pull it off better - the
> animation really grates after a while. Many of the fanfics are much,
> much better...
>
> Speaking of fanfics, there are several fics out there with _very_
> interesting initial precepts, but which dissapoint when you read them
> through, based on either execution of the story, or simply technically
> bad writing. Examples being "Home", which moved too rapidly to the big
> fight, and "Shinji's Decision", which _really_ suffers from a deficiency
> in the "show, don't tell" department. Is it considered acceptable to
> start out from someone else's initial idea? Am I allowed to "improve" -
> or try to, anyway - someone else's story? I'd be thankful for an answer
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> SP
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